Originally Posted by
Mystical_Jackass
Honestly, I feel like your deck is like 3 different Mono Black concepts, but unfortunately they don't really synergize that well together: On one hand you're trying to Ritual out a Hippie and go aggro with jitte like some Sui deck, the other hand you're trying to drop an Arena/DRS/Pestillence adding more of control style, but then you sneak in Urborg/Depths/Hexmage/Stage like "sure... why the fuck not" with absolutely no tutors or Thoughtseize/Duress to protect it.
The problem is... lets say you're facing a deck that you really just need to go aggro and kill them before they kill you... *draw hand* well SHI* you're out of luck 'cause you drew an Urborg, Thesbian Stage, Swamp, DRS, Ritual, Gatekeeper, & Withering Wisps -- GL with that one! lol And vice-a-versa, you see my point? You're trying to add all these different elements but you have no control how they come up, ya know.
It would make sense using Withering Wisps in a MBC deck to clear the board, and have Bloodghasts or something as a finisher. Or if you want to go the MBC route with Dark Depths and Arena for draw, definitely throw in some tutors like Beseech the Queen to get your pieces and win as well. All in all, you're trying to do both and MAYBE all the stars line up one game: you ritual out a Hyppie, opponent has no counter or removal, you follow up with Hymn, they drop a bunch of weenies, you get that perfect follow up and drop Withering Wisps and laugh at him, etc. But problem is majority of the time you're gonna' lose to yourself by having a less structured deck. For instance, you have no removal & no Duress/Thoughtseize's so even as an aggro your suboptimal at that; and with Depths you lack the tutors like I mentioned, so you're suboptimal and pulling that off as well.
The logic of going... "I'm going to go Painter/Grindstone... but if that doesn't work I've also got Depths/Thesbian stage...and I'll throw in brainstorm/Delver/Daze 'cause that can sometimes just run away with the victory. That's the plan, at least one of them will work" doesn't work XD