I'm not sure I understand the bashing on the Japanese list (
http://www.deckcheck.net/deck.php?id=27996). To me, it seems like a very good list in the current meta (Zoo gaining back in popularity to counter Merfolk dominance).
War Monk may not be the best creature ever, still, it goes hand in hand with Firespout. With your only creatures being Goyfs/RWM/Flyers, Firespout will often be one-sided Wraths of God. And Firespout deals with Mongoose, which can be a real pain if resolved early against Tempo Thresh.
And of course, a resolved Firespout is house vs. Merfolks.
The only thing I don't really like is Dazes, as I'm usually against Dazes in a deck without some LD plan. I would put 3 Spell snares and 1 other thing (maybe a Ponder, or 1 Grip).
Not sure it's better than Probasco's list, but I'm gonna try it for sure.