I think I can get behind that, sdematt, I can make those changes and add more combo hate (probably 2 more duresses or a duress+iok) to the side. I did like Top's interaction with Loam and Bob, but good use of Sylvan makes Bob fine as well, so I can agree with all of that. Redundant copies of Knights / Deathrites will probably be a better game 1 choice for the most part now that I consider the option.
I'll let you all know how this weekend goes, if my instincts are correct I think I'll do ok.