Originally Posted by
Navsi
You really don't need that many Recruiter targets. After Explorer and Deathrite, you only need ~3 actual bullets to have targets for them, if you're on two copies. You may as well just run the best ones (imo Ballista for lategame/utility, Bob for card advantage, Hermit for board presence) and drop some of the extra stuff for cards that actually interact with the opponent. 2 Pfire / 2 Decay / 2 Edict / 1 Kommand is a pretty slim removal package and you'll probably be lacking there - IMO you want some Brutalities (helps all the bad matchups, good with pfire if you want to keep that in) and maybe some Lilianas (either flavor). Obviously sweepers are pretty terrible with all your small low-toughness creatures, but you probably still want some somewhere given that Elves and D&T are decks and Empty the Warrens is a card. Maybe something like Fiery Confluence that has utility even if you don't want to sweep the board?
5 basics is super low and worrying. 10 untapped black sources (excl tower) is way too low. Same for 10 red sources.
I think you're trying to do too many things with the land toolbox and the recruiter toolbox - jamming both in the same deck means you have a ton of silver bullets that are garbage to draw in the opening hand, in an already inconsistent deck. You'll get hands like Grove / Karakas / Stronghold / Endless One / PFire / Decay / Dragonmaster that just do stone cold nothing, and they'll probably come up a lot.