Random thoughts:
1. Wtf? 3 Dreadnoughts?
2. Crucible - are we really so much Landstill? (I don't think so)
3. 3 Dazes - bad as always
4. 3 Trinket Mage - since we have a pretty big Toolbox and Academ Ruins it is the incorrect number imo
5. Maindeck Tarmogoyf - I personally don't like that card in the maindeck, it just doesn't fit into the game plan. Coming suprisingly out of the sideboard it is an option tho. But not Mainboard - and not two!!

Well congrats to the finish tho, I like Dreadstill after all