Hey Philip,
nice to see you here (instead of mtg-forum.de) Im actually there too, but i recommend to you, this is better here.

Ok, to your deck..

Lands: I would cut godless shrine. You should add 2 Swamps and 2 Fetchies, because you need more then 4 fetchies.
Why 2 swamps? I explain it later.

Creatures: 4 confidants = good. 2 and 3 gatekeeper + vampire = bad, my recommend is to play them as playset. Because you get with 4 gatekeeper a really good card advantage.(removal) And 4 vampires are just nice too. Especially if you're running dark rituals.

Why are you playing serra avanger? You dont play vials and wanna play 4 of them? I mean they are worthless without vial or you should play 2 of them. But for me, just for me, i would cut them all.

You are playing 21 white cards with 1 plains? I would say you should play more black.
With cc1 discard cards!!! It's nice to have them in your start hand or a ritual with nighthawk, or discard + bob (<- best imo )

Revoker isnt a mainboard card. Btw, i wouldnt play Mom without vials, because you can play her EoT with a vial and without summoning sickness.

Planeswalker: 1 elspeth? Play 2 or cut them. 1 Elspeth in your deck isnt worth. Just a place stealer.

Artifacts: Cut a Jitte! Play 1 more Sword. Like SoLaS.

Question to you...
1) How long are you reading this thread?


Pls! Just MY 2 cents.